Intro Scene Draft

Ok, so...This is System Earth's first scene. This is where it all starts! Funnily enough the first bit of dialog comes in half way through a conversation about Inspector Alderson's concern about his newly appointed job involving Digital Dreaming. No one will have a clue what this is of course. Not yet. Whether or not I'll keep this scene is not important to me at the moment. My main objective at the moment is to develop and discover my own style. I found myself bouncing back and forth between writing the dialog before the panel, and making the panel before the dialog. It worked well, and it seemed to keep a good balance between text and art.

I'm looking for some feedback so, don't hesitate to comment!

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