Draft Scenes

Progress and Development.

This project has been constantly evolving. I've done so many scenes which I am just not quite happy with. At some point I have to just say, 'its sweet, it'll do, its delivering the right message. Next scene!' but until I feel satisfied with the execution of the scenes, I'm probably gonna keep redrawing the them...till the day I die. Much gratitude goes out to Ethan Rodgers, who helped me with the dialog.

So here's the first scene I did. It was gonna be the 2nd scene of the comic. It shows, Easter mugging Loy Winthorpe and Sid Serigous for a harddrive full of valuable secure codes...

 This next page was quickly redrawn as the one below it...

So that was my first scene I did. I think this scene might be redone as a chase scene. It'll take place after this event. Easter will have the secure codes and will be getting chased by another ship (maybe a System police car thing. Maybe Winthorpe and Sid).

2nd Scene: Introduction of Jack Levotts

Its starts out with a shot of the ring of rubbish orbiting around earth. The purpose of this shot was to link the end of the first scene, which is on the Freeman Spaceport, with the start of the next, which is within a factory found on Earth.

This scene (incomplete) is represents the robot's massive impact to human society.